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Question
Notice the element of repetition in the following sentence and decide
whether it is acceptable or not. Give reason in support of your opinion.
- New Delhi has many big, big malls.
Options
Acceptable
Not acceptable
Solution
Acceptable -
The repetition of big shows the speaker’s sense of wonder and emphasis.
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- ______________________________
- ______________________________
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| "Of course, everything is so difficult now, food so scarce and dear, we could not keep going unless we charged a fee. But every week, Lucia's brothers have made their payment." She added simply, "I do not know what they do, I do not ask. Work is scarce in Verona. But whatever it is, I know they do it well." |
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___________________________
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___________________________
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___________________________
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___________________________
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______________________
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______________________
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_________________________
___________________________
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____________________
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B: "Youneedn't. I'mnotaskingyou to."
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to = _____________________
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B: "No, I can1tafford to.11
to = ____________________
